The Tin Flute is Gabrielle Roy’s first and best-known novel. Considered by many critics to be one of the greatest works of French Canadian literature, it won numerous prizes, including Canada.
The tutors reading and marking your essays deserve your consideration. They will be reading and marking many, many student essays. If you make your argument hard to follow, so that they need to re-read a paragraph (or more) to try to make sense of what you have written, you will cause irritation, and make their job slower. Realistically, it is.